This felt too real to be a dream

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This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Red_web_city » Thu Apr 04, 2013 6:28 pm

I can feel my celestial body ascending unto the heavens, and as it speeds up I think to myself "Lord, am I to see you"?, As I go higher, and higher my head begins to feel the pains of a mortal death as if I was to experiance the greatest pain ever felt if I wanted to join the heavenly father." As it becomes too much for me to bare I instantly plead for more time. Wait, for I am not ready My Lord that if you could find it in your will to allow me to continue my growth here on earth. Indeed the Lord gave me the option to join Him but it would come at a price, a price that was already paid for me in the precious blood of His Son. Who can bare the pain of entering Death?, and who would volunteer their life willingly to experiance such agony for it felt my head would explode if I ascended too high in His presence. This I shall never forget, and I pray I may be worthy to be recieved on the day.
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Panda4christ:3 » Fri Apr 05, 2013 4:55 am

I'm confused...is this an actual dream you had? Or is this fiction?
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Red_web_city » Fri Apr 05, 2013 6:08 am

It was a dream Panda, but my fictional stories would be in the "Writing" forum if you're interested
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Crossfire » Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:07 am

Uh, this is in the writing forum.
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Wolfsong » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:44 pm

Its certainly beautiful, but is it a dream, or something you're writing from imagination?
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Lynna » Fri Apr 05, 2013 3:50 pm

Wolfsong wrote:Its certainly beautiful, but is it a dream, or something you're writing from imagination?


It seems it was a dream.
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Panda4christ:3 » Fri Apr 05, 2013 4:32 pm

Red_web_city wrote:It was a dream Panda, but my fictional stories would be in the "Writing" forum if you're interested

Like Crossfire said, this is the writing forum ^^;;
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby FreddyCast » Fri Apr 05, 2013 5:26 pm

Where does fiction come from but our minds, our thoughts, our dreams. It's good Red web city. Continue.
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Re: This felt too real to be a dream

Postby Red_web_city » Sat Apr 06, 2013 3:17 pm

Thanks freddy cast
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