When I read these following poems I see that I am quite the amateur,I need to expand my vocabulary,and the poems don't quite flow as I'd like them to,but it's a start. ^^
It doesn't help that I wrote it one night were I didn't get any sleep till I wrote these. LOL! More like last night actually.
These are like the first draft,after several rewritings. XP
I might keep editing them if I get back to them.
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Morning Star, just before dawn
Seems so far, from were I am
It's no usual monotonous phase
This time I spend in star gaze
Is it foolish of me to chase?
To dream of stars,with all this space?
To think that of so many
This one so far,
yet, it's by the way it shines
the way it gives off light
All others are concealed by its light
As if the mantle of night was placed just for it
Created in thought of it
Just for this one to shine,
Just this one,
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I'm saving to buy a ticket
A ticket for a space ride
To go far into space
were the stars, and planets are
And from there I'll see
the earth, and all its seas
Still,all is fine
for one thing I wish to see
It's that which makes me wonder
To ponder,of only two things
Of God, and a morning star
