short song -tell me whut u think-

[fairyprincess90]

i wrote this one... its short but.... i like it cuz i wrote it when i was struggling to give everything to God... and theres like this kewl piano solo in it that takes up time and stuff...

ch. - Take this hurt, cause Lord i know,
Only You can take brokeness and make it whole,
And without You I can't survive,
So Lord I plead please take my life,

vs1. - all my dreams all my pain,
i want to keep from You,
I think that You, could never understand,
But theres nothing You can't do,

vs2. - I give my heart to You,
It is broken, bleeding, torn apart,
I place it in Your hands,
And thats just the start.

[Hitokiri]

Ummm...anything you write should go in the Writing Section

Sounds good, I guess.

[kryptech]

I think a lot of us can relate to the thoughts in this song when we've gone through tough times. I know that recently I've been made more aware of how much God understands us - it's amazing.

Too bad we can't hear the piano part of your song!

[KBMaster]

Yeah, I deal with those struggles all the time. I think it is a wonderful song and would love to hear it on the radio. ^_^