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Postby Kry » Wed Apr 26, 2006 3:27 pm

This is a poem I wrote.....


If Only

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I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
The thought of you,
Sweeps me off my feet.

It's all a fairy tale,
Within my imagination.
In reality, I'm so afraid,
I'll lose our friendship; devastation.

I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
I'm scared...
Every time our eyes meet.

I want to be with you,
I want to see your smile every day,
I want to be the reason for that sparkle in your eye.
I want to be able to love you, and know it's ok.

I lose my breath,
My heart skips a beat.
You and me, together...
If only life could be so sweet.


Copyright©2006


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Postby creed4 » Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:15 am

Sweet, nice Love poem
Tis No Fool to lose what he can not keep to gain what he can never lose.
What does it profit a man to gain the World yet lose his soul.
Choose Life that you Might live.
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Postby Anna Mae » Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:19 pm

I want to be able to love you, and know its ok.
'Its' should have an apostrophe here.

creed4 wrote:Sweet, nice Love poem
Agreed.
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Postby Kry » Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:40 pm

Anna Mae wrote:I want to be able to love you, and know its ok.
'Its' should have an apostrophe here.

Agreed.

odd, you know I checked that poem in microsoft word and I originally wrote it with an apostrophy, but microsoft word underlined it in green and took away the apostrophy when I spell-checked it. I guess word was confuzed because I know your right. I shall change it, thanks for commenting! ^_^
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Postby Anna Mae » Sun May 07, 2006 11:20 am

Sure thing. Often Word can't process complicated sentences correctly and thus gives incorrect advice.
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