Postby inkhana » Thu Dec 25, 2003 10:31 pm
Vrrrry cool! You're getting good at profiles, particularly the one in the foreground, and the coloring looks very nice. I am in agreement with Sangoku about the gray, though; you might maybe add just a hint of blue to pull out the blue of the characters' skin and tie the color scheme together a little more tightly (I guess it would be kinda a slate blue I'm talking about). That would probably go with the purple in their hair also; you'd still have the gray (between the contrast of good and evil) but it wouldn't be quite so stark. If you happen to have a beveling filter in your art program, you might add a bevel to your title text also (but not the text on the bottom; that would make it hard to read, I think), to give it just a little more pop.
Hope this helps!
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