Postby uc pseudonym » Thu Nov 27, 2003 1:33 pm
To answer HondaTooru's questions: It's mainly practice, and having an organized mind. One tip that I would have: look at the professional manga artists. See how many panels they have per page, their assorted styles/formations, how many pages they have per issue, etc. You'll notice one thing: there's a lot of variation. Almost anything goes, if you do it well. There aren't that many concrete rules to follow.
Now, if only all problems are that easy. I have a humble apology to make: I made my offer before I'd read the actual work in question. I just read chapters 1-6, and now I have some issues.
I'm sorry, but I'm not too certain I can do this unless some theological wrinkles are ironed out (or it is discovered you have an overall plot that makes them irrelevant).
I hold a pacifist position very seriously, and I don't think I'd feel right helping with this. Most of the Christians very blatantly use violence as a solution. If you can clarify, please do so, I'd still like to help you. Otherwise, I wish you all good luck.