Ah, very nice ^^ Just curious though, for the coloring, did you color it on a different layer that's multiplied (I'm assuming you're using Photoshop)? In some cases I see the original line art tampered and sometimes it gives it a "dirty" effect.
A few problems with proportion, mostly inconsistancies in the elongation (neck too long; legs too short; etc). And in a few pics the head is too big when the rest of the body is in proportion to themselves (First Kyo pic for example). An easy way to get the head to body width right is that, unless it's in SD mode, the head should be able to "fit" into the chest/abdomen. ^^
And just for a note, lol, I done WAY more graphically disturbing art, I'm glad that past of my "career" is over.
Just an advice from a ex-morbid artist sister in Christ to another one: It's going to eat at you. Really, those times were considered "glorious" since I got the most name recognition from them; but when I finally opened my eyes and realized just how *USELESS* they were to Him--it was hard letting go.
They actually haunted me somewhat, like a corpse under the bed, when I started devoting my skills to Him. I kept on thinking, "What if someone sees them and know that I'm a Christian--would it convey a message of hipocrisy?? Will I end up doing more harm to His name??"
I ended up praying about it and deleting the site(s) for good. I never felt more free. Though, even till now, they still haunt me. Most people still know me as Ann the Neko, Harry Potter anime fanartist and the Psycho Ann that draws bloody, macabre, art and American Mcgee's Alice fanarts.
It's a taint I can never rub off, all I can do is go forward and devote the rest to Him while I still have the chance ^^ (That "note" turned out to be a testimony
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