I wrote a song.

[Heart of Sword]

Okay, so I write LOTS of songs.

But here's one I particularly liked. There's two versions: Solitary and Non-Solitary.

Tell me what you think. Put it to your own head-music. (I imagined it on some kind of guitar, and it's somewhat upbeat.)

UPBEATNESS: 1 beat per second

The Wild’s Disease (Non-Solitary)

When we can run free
Maybe sometime sometime soon
We’ll run, just you and me
And we’ll howl at the moon

I’ve always been wild
For something inside
Will get me all riled
And I’ll pace side-to-side

For when I see the hills
When I see the trees
I always get the chills
Of the Wild’s disease

Breaking away now
From the flood of which I drown
And like the wild, I vow
That man can’t tie me down!

No matter what they want
I’m not some tamed pet
That they safely taunt
Without worry of a threat

For when I see the hills
When I see the trees
I always get the chills
Of the Wild’s disease

Since now we can run free
Maybe sometime sometime soon
You’ll come alongside me
And we’ll howl at the moon

For when we see the hills
When we see the trees
We get those strange chills
Of the Wild’s disease.








The Wild’s Disease (Solitary)

When I can run free
Maybe sometime sometime soon
I’ll run, alone, just me
And I’ll howl at the moon

I’ve always been wild
For something inside
Will get me all riled
And I’ll pace side-to-side

For when I see the hills
When I see the trees
I always get the chills
Of the Wild’s disease

Breaking away now
From the flood of which I drown
And like the wild, I vow
That man can’t tie me down!

No matter what they want
I’m not some tamed pet
That they safely taunt
Without worry of a threat

For when I see the hills
When I see the trees
I always get the chills
Of the Wild’s disease

Since now I can run free
Maybe sometime sometime soon
When I’m running, alone, just me
I’ll stop and howl at the moon

For when I see the hills
When I see the trees
I get those strange chills
Of the Wild’s disease.

(c) <name clipped> 2005

[Daniel_p_Diddy]

I like it it is very very GOOD!!!


I also wrote a song but yours is better

ROCK ON

[Blitzkrieg1701]

Wow. Cool stuff, there. You know, there's a topic for original songs here, you oughta check it out.

[termyt]

Well done. It flows very well.

[Heart of Sword]

Thanks, hehheh...