this is a poem about rurouni kenshin

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this is a poem about rurouni kenshin

Postby churchgirl111 » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:37 pm

[INDENT]In the days of reconciliation

Bladed past
scar burning crimson red
bile tasting death
a river of crimson
eyes glowing red
in the days of youth
death is the master
a force of sword and scar

repentence
heartache and revenge
smiles that are fleeting
tears that seem neverending
When will it be done?
How long must it go on?
Freedom


This is about what i feel kenshin must have going through his mind reconciling with his past...i'm going to write one of what would have happened had he maybe been a Christian that will probably be later....
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Postby Razgriz » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:39 pm

Very emotionally charged IMO, I like it. :thumb:
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Postby true_noir_chloe » Thu Oct 23, 2003 7:57 pm

Very nice. :thumb: I liked it. :)

[size=84][color=seagreen]YOU SEE


You see into the deepest part of me ---

beyond the fog I hide behind.

You cast your light upon the shadows

that stretch like cobwebs in my mind.

You ease the pain when I am hurting,

and morbid visions from my past

pierce into the realm of Reason

as though I danced on blades of glass.

You grant me strength when I have fallen

and, once again, I've lost my way.

You take my hand in Yours and lead me

into the promise of a brand new day.

You bring order to all my chaos,

yet set my well-laid plans awry.

You place me on a firm foundation ---

then give me wings so I can fly.

You sand away my roughened edges

and polish all the dullest parts

until I stand before Your presence...

a newly-sculpted work of art.

You see into the heart within me,

right through my motives and selfish will.

And yet, in spite of all You see

You say You love me even still.


~by D.M.~

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