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Postby Fireproof » Sun Feb 20, 2005 9:49 pm

This will be a great story. It begins now. O.O
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Postby bigsleepj » Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:03 pm

Sorry to nit-pick, but I can't open the file on my Word. Can you maybe save it as an RTF file so that it could work on more PCs.

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Postby Photosoph » Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:53 pm

Same with me. Can't open it. Would like to read it, tho.
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Postby Fireproof » Mon Feb 21, 2005 8:05 am

Alright. I converted it to RTF and zipped it up. Enjoy. ^^
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Postby Kaori » Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:39 am

That is better; I can actually open the attachment now.

It is a bit difficult to make any meaningful comments on such a small amount of material, so I will simply note that I found this beginning interesting enough that I will continue to read should you post any more of it.
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Postby Photosoph » Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:56 am

Cool! I liked what you've written so far. Would be cool to see more. :)
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Postby bigsleepj » Tue Feb 22, 2005 11:57 am

Pros:
• Its well written.
• Its interesting

Cons:
• Too short for its own good. Make it 20x longer. :grin: I take it this is part of a larger story. If so I'm looking forward to it.
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Postby Fireproof » Tue Feb 22, 2005 3:55 pm

bigsleepj wrote:Cons:
• Too short for its own good. Make it 20x longer. :grin: I take it this is part of a larger story. If so I'm looking forward to it.

This is only the beginning. I want this to be at least 50 pages long in the end, probably more. Like 300 more. Hmm... Speaking of "more," I'll write some more tonight. Expect another page to a page and a half.
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