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a poem i made for a school event

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a poem i made for a school event

Postby vash10429 » Wed Feb 16, 2005 8:49 pm

:hits_self i wrote this poem a while ago but last week we had a poetry jam in school and i brought it in :thumbsup: guess what!!! funny thing was that tho if it wasnt as short i wouldve won award!!!! :bang: i got kind of mad but now i look back and i see that it taught me patience well without further here it is!!!

[font=Garamond]black

i wished the world would care
to be just more aware
it seems to just stare
into the air
unfair


i wish that i had wings
i fly and look at things
id adorn the crowns of kings


but im grounded like a snake
and its starting to make me bake
its just more than i can take
my world just fades all into black
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so what do u think guys? i know its bad...but wrote long time ago so dont judge it too harsh!!! :rant:
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Postby Warrior 4 Jesus » Wed Feb 16, 2005 9:02 pm

Some parts I like
Others I spite
Poems need not rhyme
All the time
Some parts don't make sense
And leave me feeling dense
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Postby Tabitha_Malcom » Thu Feb 17, 2005 8:26 am

Rock Fighter Gordon is anime
I like you anyway
Love is love is love
Like a dovr
My name it TAbitha
Like the brand name

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