Zane wrote::lol:, I thought the stream of thought wasn't as bad as some books have it... ie James Joyce, Ulyssus, now thats wack. Oh but then again... its a sailor listening to Marlow tell the story in 1st person, so its like 2 first persons together,... fair enough I guess.
I have to say "Stream of Consciousness" is something to get used to and isn't for all tastes. It's not my favourite type of narrative, however if I write in the first person I usually end up writing it in that style.
Still if you write psychological stories its a good way to write it. What I've always liked about Joseph Conrad is the way he writes adventures tales that are also deep, literate excursions instead of just a "penny dreadful."
And now, something a bit off subject.
If you want to try a brilliant "stream of consciousness" trip into a different "heart of darkness" try
"To the white Sea" by James Dicky if you have a strong stomach, that is. Actually, in my list of "greatest books ever written" "To the white sea" gets a dishonarable mention, because the books only attraction for me is from a literary point of view; its a masterpiece of modern fiction with imagery, scenes and discriptions that stayed with me all the way. It's also one of the best written books I've ever encountered and is an interesting literary experience.
On the other hand the tale itself is sadistic, machoistic, perverse, sick, bloody, disgusting, violent and just plain immoral, which is why I don't give it a definite recommendation. James Dicky wrote the book and movie "Deliverance" and if you've seen that you'll know about half of what to expect. The story is intriguing though. A gunman during World War 2 is shot down over Tokyo as the war begins to draw to a close. He is left with only his survival kit, a silk map of Japan and his survival instincts that he gathered during his youth growing up in the northern wilderness of Alaska. Slowly Muldrow makes his way across Japan towards the northern islands where he could live out the rest of his life in the snowy wastes. Along the way he leaves a trail of destruction behind him because he has no empathy or love and pretty much kills everyone he crosses paths. At one point he knives an old Japanese lady, cuts her head off with a breadknife and throws it onto a waterwheel. Then Muldrow kills an old gardner, steals a swan and eats it raw. Then Muldrow comes across an old samurai, who is almost too much for him, and kills him and his cowering wife in cold blood. And so forth. You get the picture. This book has no humanity in it so I wouldn't bother reading it except for examining it's writing style. But compared to this, "Heart of Darkness" is "My Neighbour Totoro".