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Postby Lyger » Wed Apr 07, 2004 8:07 pm

I have started up an anime, story, characters, and some other things...Its a little project I have been working on...anyhow, I was wondering if anyone had ideas for it...All of it is Christian based, set in England, and some major characters include Amos, Ezekiel, Enoc, Isaiah, Jeremiah, and Noah...Just any name that sounds cool really...I am need of ideas of of the enemy and the storyline...but just keep in mind Medieval Europe and christian things are only acceptable, I cannot pay anyone anything of value, except credit to the character of ideas you have put forth, I am also in need of an artist... lol...im in need of a lot of things...anyhow if u would like to help me, post up some stuff, administator willing, or email me at [email]cryolyger@aol.com ...than[/email]ks for you guys' time;

Take care and God Bless...

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Postby kaji » Thu Apr 08, 2004 3:50 am

Do you have an idea of what you want the story to be about?
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Postby Lyger » Thu Apr 08, 2004 4:10 am

actually this is as far as I have come: Medeival style fighting, Christian based, batlle against evil; the only other idea I had was a Nomad (maybe Amos) goes from city to city, in hopes of forming a team to fight off his brother (he will be Knightmare for now); now any or all this could change if and when someone gives me a better idea...Im more of the charcter descriptionist...the other jobs are wide open...lol...
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Postby kaji » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:04 am

Consider some of these things:

Atmosphere: do you want this to be a complete comedy, or a little funny at times (maybe ironic humor ) but mostly serious, or totally serious.

Target Audience: What age group do you want to relate to most in your story (note: this may determine the ages of your characters, and even have a profound effect on your atmosphere.)

Realism: Will the characters have exaggerated attacks and weapons, or more realistic ones for the time period. (like giant swords, or primitive guns, Super kamikaze blitz attack, ect). This could also be effected by the target audience.

Message: Do you have a specific message you want to convey through the story?
Example: God is merciful, “I can do all things through Christ who strengthens meâ€
Depend on it. God's work done in God's way will never lack God's supply. He is too wise a God to frustrate His purposes for lack of funds, and He can just as easily supply them ahead of time as afterwards, and He much prefers doing so.
- J. Hudson Taylor
I remember that one fateful day when Coach took me aside. I knew what was coming. "You don't have to tell me," I said. "I'm off the team, aren't I?" "Well," said Coach, "you never were really ON the team. You made that uniform you're wearing out of rags and towels, and your helmet is a toy space helmet. You show up at practice and then either steal the ball and make us chase you to get it back, or you try to tackle people at inappropriate times." It was all true what he was saying. And yet, I thought something is brewing inside the head of this Coach. He sees something in me, some kind of raw talent that he can mold. But that's when I felt the handcuffs go on.
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Postby JediSonic » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:05 am

Interesting...

Right now I'm at a shortage of ideas for myself, let alone others :lol: I'll get back to you if I think of anything
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........I have......

Postby Lyger » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:25 am

Heres the deal, Im not really a story maker, I have numerous Ideas but they all get shutdown....thats one of the main things i need is a plot... I dont want to take anyone elses, and I want it to be a group project, Im not much for the solo style, kinda a group decision thing...
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Postby kaji » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:37 am

What were some of your ideas that get shutdown?
Those could be a good place to start.
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I remember that one fateful day when Coach took me aside. I knew what was coming. "You don't have to tell me," I said. "I'm off the team, aren't I?" "Well," said Coach, "you never were really ON the team. You made that uniform you're wearing out of rags and towels, and your helmet is a toy space helmet. You show up at practice and then either steal the ball and make us chase you to get it back, or you try to tackle people at inappropriate times." It was all true what he was saying. And yet, I thought something is brewing inside the head of this Coach. He sees something in me, some kind of raw talent that he can mold. But that's when I felt the handcuffs go on.
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Well im not sure if theres enough room....

Postby Lyger » Thu Apr 08, 2004 6:54 am

I was thinking of these possibilities:

1) Since the setting is Medeival Europe, A nomad (knight), goes from village to village recruiting people to fight off an unstopable evil, different classes of character join, i.e. Knights, swordsman, archers, mages, etc...

2) They have powers, Basic elements Earth, Fire, Water, Wind, Light, Dark, Ice, and whatnot....

3) A storyline dedicated to the view of the villain; (never seen it done), and in the end you realize the villain is in reality not that bad...

4) Angels vs. Demons, Angels and Demons fighting for the souls of the people on Earth; as battles are won in either favor, they (Humans) start to assist their comrades (angel or demon)

5) hmmm....is there a 5?...ohhh yeah, kinda a Post appoctaliptic (i know i butchered that...) anyhow, they are military soldiers, fighting off non-believers; after Second coming of Christ, so Mark of the Beast (humans) vs. New believers....

those are the top 5 I shutdown....Anyone who wants can help me decide by choosing there favorite then second....I will tally the results and that willl be the project we work on....
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Postby shamanking343 » Thu Apr 08, 2004 9:08 am

hey thats cool, youre doing the same thing i did :thumb:. Sounds cool, sorry I dont have any ideas though, what about basing it on crusades
I AM THE WAY INTO THE DOLEFUL CITY
I AM THE WAY INTO ETERNAL GRIEF,
I AM THE WAY TO A FORSAKEN RACE.
JUSTICE IT WAS THAT MOVED MY GREAT CREATOR;
DIVINE OMNIPOTENCE CREATED ME,
AND HIGHEST WISDOM JOINED WITH PRIMAL LOVE.
BEFORE ME NOTHING BUT ETERNAL THINGS
WERE MADE, AND I SHALL LAST ETERNALLY
ABANDON ALL HOPE, ALL YOU WHO ENTER

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Crusades...hmmm...

Postby Lyger » Fri Apr 09, 2004 12:00 am

thats a great idea...any other suggestion as of storylines?
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Thinking of the crusades idea...

Postby Lyger » Fri Apr 09, 2004 9:28 pm

(by the way thanks for that), I have come up with a storyline, tell me what you think of it...: Its a family decedent power thing...example, Last Hero's son is new Hero, Last Guardian's son is new guardian...etc...Hero's power light of course, guardians thunder, Evil dark of course, and the hero side would have good magic, life, water earth, while the dark will have Dark, destruction and what not...

If you have anything to add, or would like me to fix something, let me know please...also send me your character descriptions so i may add them to the story as it pregresses...

Also a list of character descriptions is availible on request...
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Update...

Postby Lyger » Mon Apr 12, 2004 9:51 pm

Since not many of you guys are hitting me up with ideas, i thought if i made a small little site i could just post updates on it, and have u guys email me your ideas, for this is taking alot longer then i anticipated...I want to give a big thanks to Kaji for all his assistance, and thanks to everyone else on the board, ill stip bothering u guys now...heh...

take care and God Bless;

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Postby kaji » Tue Apr 13, 2004 4:00 am

Lyger,

Sorry, I havent posted any ideas yet. I think you are off to a good start though.
I would be interested in a list of character descriptions.

-kaji
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- J. Hudson Taylor
I remember that one fateful day when Coach took me aside. I knew what was coming. "You don't have to tell me," I said. "I'm off the team, aren't I?" "Well," said Coach, "you never were really ON the team. You made that uniform you're wearing out of rags and towels, and your helmet is a toy space helmet. You show up at practice and then either steal the ball and make us chase you to get it back, or you try to tackle people at inappropriate times." It was all true what he was saying. And yet, I thought something is brewing inside the head of this Coach. He sees something in me, some kind of raw talent that he can mold. But that's when I felt the handcuffs go on.
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Postby Lyger » Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:48 am

update might want to refer to the writing section i have posted several ideas up there, section entitled anime/comic assistance. As for this section here is the bio of the main character, he is the only concrete/sold character i have. Btw. sight thing bombed : P. :

Amos:

† Age: 20-23
† Weight: 220-240
† Height: 6'0"-6'1"
† Build: light muscle
† Tone: European/white
† Weaopon: Cross-Lance-Sword, its a combonation of the 3, or possibly just the last
2, but upon request i can upload the weapon i had in mind
† Armor: Plate mail/Chainmail, Blue and white/ Blue and silver
† Eye color: Blue
† Hair: Short brown hair, layered (like pso.) or perhaps parted in middle

I cant find my notebook with it all, thats all i remember off the top of my head. P.M. me if you want to hear all my ideas for characters
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Postby Lyger » Wed Jun 22, 2005 11:52 am

oh and I took you up on your crusades idea, I think they are going to be wanders, just fighting tyranny, no powers (thats lame) just Knights with a mission.
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