Saint Kevin wrote:Funky looking pair of scissors on page 4 (and 5). Also, it's probably not your fault, but almost all of chapter 5 is way too dark. If I hadn't turned the gamma all the way up on my monitor, I wouldn't have been able to follow it all. My biggest advice (and what do I know about art anyway) is that there could have been more backgrounds. That's more like an icing on the cake kind of thing really - they don't really add much plotwise, and probably take a long time to do. Other than that, this is great stuff. That, and beggars can't be choosers. Keep up the excellent manga Ink, can't wait to see what happens next.
EDIT: I couldn't get it right on the chapter 5 (not 4) thing either. *sigh*
madphilb wrote:BTW, care to discuss your problem with backgrounds, you seem to be doing fine.
(oh, and don't forget to check the bottom of MY signature)
Chapter was a little on the short side compared to the last two chapters...
So, have you finished chapter 6 yet?
inkhana wrote:The main thing I have problems with (in ref to backgrounds) is perspective.
Very well, I do have some constructive criticism. Plan things out quite a ways before hand so you can get an issue 14-22 pages in length (by "plan things out" I mean the number of pages various events will consume). Consistancy doesn't matter greatly in webcomics, but is more important for a manga. Every chapter does not have to form a coherent whole, nor do the endings have to be suspenseful every time.
inkhana wrote:Hi WillieDoc! Long time no see!
>Do you have plans on publishing this or keeping it all on the web?
No, I don't have any plans to publish it...I'd like to keep it all on the internet so anyone may read it. When I started SB, this was something I told myself - I wasn't going to publish it. (maybe the next story I do? haha).
I like to have the hardcopy of great works and this would be one of them. And nothing is wrong with making a profit for the talent God has given you. My PM to you from way back still stands.
Will Smith, Jr wrote:Hey Phil, is Megatokyo Christian based or something?
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