Gideon's Army -- a western horror story
PostPosted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:48 am
Okay, here's another quick comic I thought some of you might like.
I'm writing a series of short comic stories (in different styles) called Gideon's Army, about a blind gunslinging Jesuit vampire hunter in the Old West.
His name is Gideon.
It will be an anthology series, essentially, with a number of different short stories that, collected together, will form a long narrative.
I'm just the writer (remember the stick figure graphic novel?), I didn't do the artwork. That was by my friend Joe Spicer.
So, anyway, as far as ratings . . .
RELIGION: There are some theological elements. Vampirism is evil. The cross is good. Nothing new there, although I do have a different take on the power of the cross. I'm pretty conservative, so I doubt it will offend anyone, but you never know.
VIOLENCE: Obviously, when you have a gunslinger there's going to be violence. So there is some shooting and an evil vampire doing evil vampire things.
LANGUAGE: One "damnation".
SEXUALITY: Does cleavage count? I know some people write vampires as very erotic, but I just . . . don't. Yuck.
But yeah, not for kids.
I wrote this a while ago. If this ever sees print again (it appeared in two different anthologies), I will change some of the dialogue. ("You blind fool!" "I may be blind, but it's you who cannot see!" True words . . . but can you get more cliche?)
Anyway, I think for what it is, it's fun. I like it, anyway.
For another western, check out "The Ballad of the Freak", a 24-hour comic I wrote and drew myself in 24 hours:
http://www.comicspace.com/benavery/comics.php?action=read&file_id=72496
No language. No sexual situations. Very little violence. It's more of a Jimmy Stewart western than a John Wayne one. But darned if I don't like to read it. It's one of the few projects I've worked on that I like to go back and look at, and not just for reference because I have to remind myself what happened in the earlier chapters.
~ Ben
I'm writing a series of short comic stories (in different styles) called Gideon's Army, about a blind gunslinging Jesuit vampire hunter in the Old West.
His name is Gideon.
It will be an anthology series, essentially, with a number of different short stories that, collected together, will form a long narrative.
I'm just the writer (remember the stick figure graphic novel?), I didn't do the artwork. That was by my friend Joe Spicer.
So, anyway, as far as ratings . . .
RELIGION: There are some theological elements. Vampirism is evil. The cross is good. Nothing new there, although I do have a different take on the power of the cross. I'm pretty conservative, so I doubt it will offend anyone, but you never know.
VIOLENCE: Obviously, when you have a gunslinger there's going to be violence. So there is some shooting and an evil vampire doing evil vampire things.
LANGUAGE: One "damnation".
SEXUALITY: Does cleavage count? I know some people write vampires as very erotic, but I just . . . don't. Yuck.
But yeah, not for kids.
I wrote this a while ago. If this ever sees print again (it appeared in two different anthologies), I will change some of the dialogue. ("You blind fool!" "I may be blind, but it's you who cannot see!" True words . . . but can you get more cliche?)
Anyway, I think for what it is, it's fun. I like it, anyway.
For another western, check out "The Ballad of the Freak", a 24-hour comic I wrote and drew myself in 24 hours:
http://www.comicspace.com/benavery/comics.php?action=read&file_id=72496
No language. No sexual situations. Very little violence. It's more of a Jimmy Stewart western than a John Wayne one. But darned if I don't like to read it. It's one of the few projects I've worked on that I like to go back and look at, and not just for reference because I have to remind myself what happened in the earlier chapters.
~ Ben