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CarTune (2): Paranormal Police Department

PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 6:30 pm
by Torokun
Minimum age:14

Violence: 9 (Animal violence, implied murder)

Language: 8 ("D" and "H" word present... harsher language is bleeped)

Sexual Content: 0

Nudity (or skimpy outfits): 0

Bad Religion: 10 (like the title says, it deals with paranormal events much in the same vain as Hellboy...)

CarTune is a series of comics I am doing. It's a very simple concept. Comic series that features cars... That's all! So, it could be something really cute in one episode. It could be a short story... or series... It's totally random.

What I am sharing here is the beginning of the second chapter (first one... i'm still on page 1). I drew them when I had free time. So, it's very sketchy... not refined at all... Also, the translation is little awkward... But, you will get the idea...

So... without further due... here they are...


Paranormal Police Department 01

Paranormal Police Department 02

Oh yeah... it's in my Korean blog... so if it asks you for a language pack, just hit "ignore"

PostPosted: Tue Sep 20, 2005 11:10 pm
by bigsleepj
Egads! You are very talented. Not only is it interesting so far but the art-work is excellent!!!! (as opposed to be being good or great which is lower on the scale ). I'd very much like to see the rest of it! Keep up the good work!!

one question though: Is each chapter on one page or is there many others? I'm asking because I'm not sure if there is a "page" I should "turn" if you know what I mean. I keep getting "??????" which I assume is where the Korean should be.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 11:01 am
by The Last Bard
Dude, my computor's slow, but I have it pulling up...Even just looking at the bits and pieces...! You're doing a sweet job!

PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 11:02 am
by Torokun
bigsleepj: Thanks for the complement. (o^~^o)

Each link is a chapter. So, you don't have to turn any pages.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 12:51 pm
by bigsleepj
Torokun wrote:Each link is a chapter. So, you don't have to turn any pages.

Hmmm. Thanks for clearing that up. I like the way the viewer has to keep scrolling downwards. Its an interesting way of doing it. :) I'm just surprised that more CAA members didn't comment so far.

PostPosted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 6:21 pm
by Warrior 4 Jesus
Awesome stuff mate! Your style is very dynamic but the action/story is clear also. Very interesting! I think you rated the comics a bit too high. A rating of 9 (violence) is really bad, and language of 8 is pretty bad and I wouldn't say either of those are above 6.
Great stuff! Can't wait for the rest!

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 12:13 am
by Torokun
why.... thank you.
About the rating... I guess I'm a bit conservative... I did say it's about PG13... And in movies, above contents will get me about that rating.

those are 100% resolution size I sketched in photoshop. Mainly using 3 and 5 brush. I find it difficult to do anything detailed at this size. So, I"m going to up it for next chapter...

PostPosted: Thu Sep 22, 2005 7:00 am
by Gypsy
Excellent stuff! I loved the fight over the mail - your action scenes are really fluid. I can't wait to read more! ^^

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 12:00 pm
by Mave
Oh wow..this is excellent indeed. I can't comment much for now but you're doing a great job with the action panels!

PostPosted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 8:34 pm
by soul alive
Wow, just, wow. Nice job, I really like your sketchy style, and the color scheme you use. Very effective. And it's neat to see someone make use of the "infinite canvas," you don't see that too much. I can't wait to see more.

PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:22 pm
by Torokun
Thanks guys... (and ladies...)

I've been super busy at work... and I just started taking some classes at UCLA Extension program... So, I haven't had a chance to draw more these days...

But, I will get back into it ASAP.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 06, 2006 12:47 pm
by KA1-EG13
Please do, I would like to see more of it.

The artwork is exceptional. Keep at it.

PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 10:13 am
by Shao Feng-Li
This stuff is awsome. You ought to get published methinks.