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Just created

PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 3:42 pm
by indyrocker
Hay every one this is my first website and i would love feadback and ceepin mind that its just my own rambolings and stuff almost like a blog but not cuz its got a conection to my blog so coment away! o its at http://freewebs.com/agentsmith700

PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 10:52 am
by Simon
agentsmith700 wrote:Hay every one this is my first website and i would love feadback and ceepin mind that its just my own rambolings and stuff almost like a blog but not cuz its got a conection to my blog so coment away! o its at http://freewebs.com/agentsmith700


interesting site. you're a pretty good poet...
I didn't go through all of them but do you have any christian poems?

PostPosted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 8:16 pm
by indyrocker
not yet i write mostly to get stuff off my chest after a fight and such so ya!


ps did you read "fallen Angel" cuz its sorta a christian song at leas that is what i ment it to be.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 6:59 am
by Simon
agentsmith700 wrote:not yet i write mostly to get stuff off my chest after a fight and such so ya!


ps did you read "fallen Angel" cuz its sorta a christian song at leas that is what i ment it to be.


"Fallen angel" can be very tricky. it sounds like someone walking with satan or a demon because it's talking about a fallen angel. but what do you mean by fallen angel?

PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:21 am
by indyrocker
well what I ment was by fallen angel is a guide of human qualitys so they still screw up at times.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 9:31 am
by Spirit Ninja
^___^ nice nice! I like the layout! ESPECIALLY the shooting stars thing. ^____^ I didn't read your poems yet. I'll do that now. yay!

PostPosted: Fri Oct 22, 2004 7:26 pm
by indyrocker
Thanks if any one wants to create there own free web site freewebs is an awsome choice however limated it is on the amount of content per page.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 8:49 am
by Simon
agentsmith700 wrote:well what I ment was by fallen angel is a guide of human qualitys so they still screw up at times.



Wow, I like that a lot.
But it can still misguide someone at first glance or with no explanation.

PostPosted: Tue Oct 26, 2004 12:26 pm
by indyrocker
ya its an unfinished work so ya evetualy it will be more clear and was baised on fallen angel by striketherman!