Okay, I wrote a story for the local author's contest that happens in this city in the Spring, and I want to share it with you guys to get some tips and opinions. Heck, maybe you guys can find spelling or gramar errors that were missed between Spell-check, Mom, and myself. It's limited to 2,000 words. What a drag, neh? That means I had to cut down on a lot of descriptions. But please, tell me what you think!
(Here's hoping that for once I started a topic in the right place. I have a habit of accidentally put things in the wrong forums.

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