Guider of the Flame: Chapter 1
PostPosted: Fri Jul 18, 2003 8:48 pm
I wrote this a while back. I'm working on Chapter 2 for now, though it's going pretty slowly. I intend to finish the story however.
Guider of the Flame
Song Lyrics are the intellectual property of their respective owners
Original plot Copyright Nathan Sinclair 2003
Rated GP-13 - Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance, Humour
Chapter One
"So lately been wondering
Who will be there to take my place"
I never could manage without you...
"When I'm gone, you'll need love
To light the shadows on your face"
Your solemn promise, once a beacon of light in a dying world...
"If a greater wave shall fall
It'll fall upon us all"
The storms are raging, where are you now?
"With those dreams that are set in stone
Could you make it on your own"
I will sorely miss you, my love...
[----------------------------------------]
Small glimmers of light began to emerge through the curtains covering the drapes as sun shone on the small town of Dale, waking up the ever restful Elaina from her calm sleep. She opened her eyes, got out of bed, opened the curtains and let the crisp, calm breeze refresh her from her nice sleep. Opening the wooden door of her small cabin her light feet pressed lightly on the grass outside, she gracefully walked over to the orange tree outside her house to pick some fresh oranges to make juice out of. After picking, she spent time admiring the nice view around her. Numerous green pine trees, tall redifers and short sequoias surrounded her house, on a hill above the rest of the town.
She slowly walked back into the house, placed the oranges on the table and retrieved the juicer. Squeezing the orange juice, she placed it in the jug and saved the other oranges for later. She poured some of the juice into a glass and placed it on the table. Taking some nuts from the cupboard while chopping up some of the oranges she had collected, and using the milk she had obtained from the village cows, she made a substantial breakfast and sat down to admire the atmosphere around her, while enjoying the meal she had in front of her.
Just before she had finished her nice meal, 3 men stormed into her house, anxiously in need of Elaina's help.
"What are thou doing Samuel, Sebastian and Lance?", an inquiring, annoyed look on her face, "Have you no respect for nature? I was merely going to finish off my meal and head out to see you."
"Very sorry miss, won't happen again miss."
The three strolled outside and sat down on the grass, awaiting the arrival of Elaina for which her assistance was crucial to their mission.
Meanwhile, inside, Elaina finished off her meal and took care of the dishes. She slowly walked to the bath room, washed her face before coming back outside to meet her three acquaintances.
"Now what was it you 3 gentleman wanted?"
"The Village Elder wanted to see you urgently, miss" said Samuel, rather solemnly, tilting his head down and seeming to be an apologetic reply more than anything else.
"THEN WHY DID THREE PEOPLE COME? AND WHY ARE YOU APOLOGIZING TO ME?" She lets out a long sigh. "Inform the Village Elder I will come and see him soon" replied Elaina, an angry tone in her voice.
Samuel, Sebastian and Lance ran off down to the main village while Elaina prepared herself for the meeting, wearing a bluish cloak to match her beautiful blue eyes, no hat as to reveal her blonde hair and a teal dress to match her cloak. Taking her time in getting ready, 15 minutes lapsed. In that time Sebastian had been able to inform the village elder that Elaina would be coming and to prepare properly.
Elaina closed the drapes in her house, shut the door and proceeded to walk down the hill, reaching the village shortly after. As she looked around the village she saw familiar buildings, people walking in the streets (the town was paved with shingle paths around the buildings and houses, so that horses and people could pass through more easily). Looking to the left she saw the blacksmith house, a few grocery and supply stores, and a few run down houses that had been abandoned save for the orphanage which took in stray children. She looked around and saw the Village Elders' house, lying on a remote area to the north east, a stream surrounding it. A bridge lay across the stream, leading to the house. Much like Elaina's own house, it was on grass and had many trees around it. Further to the south there was an abandoned cave that had long since had it's use forgotten, a makeshift barrier protecting people from entering the cave.
She proceeded towards the elders house, people looking and greeting her as she progressed further north. Children ran through the streets playing their little games, while parents tried to stop them, others visiting the grocery stores and communing with other folk in the village. There looked to be a big gathering of people to the south east, leading Elaina to suspect that something was indeed worrying the village elder, and that the anxiety of the three men who visited her earlier was not without reason.
"Top o' the mornin' to ya, miss" said one of the older locals, Agnus.
"Good morning to you too Agnus. It's nice to see you up" replied Elaina.
"All because of you, miss" replied Agnus, a small smile on her face, and calm tone in her voice as she spoke to Elaina. "The Elder seems to be a more worryin' miss. I do hope you can help him", a tone of anxiety had entered her voice, and Elaina noted the change.
"I'll do my best", Elaina replied, as she moved forward across the bridge and knocked on the Elder's door.
"Come in" replied an old man, presumably the Elder.
"It's Elaina, Elder.", said Elaina.
"Ah! It's good to see you" he said, his eyes barely opening as the door swung open and Elaina entered the room. Around her she could see numerous bookshelves, a nice couch and a small table in the center of the room. There was a door to a small room in the top left hand corner of the room. ((I think I deleted a couple 'rooms' but still, try not to use the word 'room' too too much)) The couch and table were at a significantly lower level than the rest, forming what looked like a cup when she took in all her surroundings at once. Elaina walked down the stairs and sat down on one of the chairs nearest to the Elder.
"You asked for my assistance Elder?" said Elaina.
"That I didâ€
Guider of the Flame
Song Lyrics are the intellectual property of their respective owners
Original plot Copyright Nathan Sinclair 2003
Rated GP-13 - Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance, Humour
Chapter One
"So lately been wondering
Who will be there to take my place"
I never could manage without you...
"When I'm gone, you'll need love
To light the shadows on your face"
Your solemn promise, once a beacon of light in a dying world...
"If a greater wave shall fall
It'll fall upon us all"
The storms are raging, where are you now?
"With those dreams that are set in stone
Could you make it on your own"
I will sorely miss you, my love...
[----------------------------------------]
Small glimmers of light began to emerge through the curtains covering the drapes as sun shone on the small town of Dale, waking up the ever restful Elaina from her calm sleep. She opened her eyes, got out of bed, opened the curtains and let the crisp, calm breeze refresh her from her nice sleep. Opening the wooden door of her small cabin her light feet pressed lightly on the grass outside, she gracefully walked over to the orange tree outside her house to pick some fresh oranges to make juice out of. After picking, she spent time admiring the nice view around her. Numerous green pine trees, tall redifers and short sequoias surrounded her house, on a hill above the rest of the town.
She slowly walked back into the house, placed the oranges on the table and retrieved the juicer. Squeezing the orange juice, she placed it in the jug and saved the other oranges for later. She poured some of the juice into a glass and placed it on the table. Taking some nuts from the cupboard while chopping up some of the oranges she had collected, and using the milk she had obtained from the village cows, she made a substantial breakfast and sat down to admire the atmosphere around her, while enjoying the meal she had in front of her.
Just before she had finished her nice meal, 3 men stormed into her house, anxiously in need of Elaina's help.
"What are thou doing Samuel, Sebastian and Lance?", an inquiring, annoyed look on her face, "Have you no respect for nature? I was merely going to finish off my meal and head out to see you."
"Very sorry miss, won't happen again miss."
The three strolled outside and sat down on the grass, awaiting the arrival of Elaina for which her assistance was crucial to their mission.
Meanwhile, inside, Elaina finished off her meal and took care of the dishes. She slowly walked to the bath room, washed her face before coming back outside to meet her three acquaintances.
"Now what was it you 3 gentleman wanted?"
"The Village Elder wanted to see you urgently, miss" said Samuel, rather solemnly, tilting his head down and seeming to be an apologetic reply more than anything else.
"THEN WHY DID THREE PEOPLE COME? AND WHY ARE YOU APOLOGIZING TO ME?" She lets out a long sigh. "Inform the Village Elder I will come and see him soon" replied Elaina, an angry tone in her voice.
Samuel, Sebastian and Lance ran off down to the main village while Elaina prepared herself for the meeting, wearing a bluish cloak to match her beautiful blue eyes, no hat as to reveal her blonde hair and a teal dress to match her cloak. Taking her time in getting ready, 15 minutes lapsed. In that time Sebastian had been able to inform the village elder that Elaina would be coming and to prepare properly.
Elaina closed the drapes in her house, shut the door and proceeded to walk down the hill, reaching the village shortly after. As she looked around the village she saw familiar buildings, people walking in the streets (the town was paved with shingle paths around the buildings and houses, so that horses and people could pass through more easily). Looking to the left she saw the blacksmith house, a few grocery and supply stores, and a few run down houses that had been abandoned save for the orphanage which took in stray children. She looked around and saw the Village Elders' house, lying on a remote area to the north east, a stream surrounding it. A bridge lay across the stream, leading to the house. Much like Elaina's own house, it was on grass and had many trees around it. Further to the south there was an abandoned cave that had long since had it's use forgotten, a makeshift barrier protecting people from entering the cave.
She proceeded towards the elders house, people looking and greeting her as she progressed further north. Children ran through the streets playing their little games, while parents tried to stop them, others visiting the grocery stores and communing with other folk in the village. There looked to be a big gathering of people to the south east, leading Elaina to suspect that something was indeed worrying the village elder, and that the anxiety of the three men who visited her earlier was not without reason.
"Top o' the mornin' to ya, miss" said one of the older locals, Agnus.
"Good morning to you too Agnus. It's nice to see you up" replied Elaina.
"All because of you, miss" replied Agnus, a small smile on her face, and calm tone in her voice as she spoke to Elaina. "The Elder seems to be a more worryin' miss. I do hope you can help him", a tone of anxiety had entered her voice, and Elaina noted the change.
"I'll do my best", Elaina replied, as she moved forward across the bridge and knocked on the Elder's door.
"Come in" replied an old man, presumably the Elder.
"It's Elaina, Elder.", said Elaina.
"Ah! It's good to see you" he said, his eyes barely opening as the door swung open and Elaina entered the room. Around her she could see numerous bookshelves, a nice couch and a small table in the center of the room. There was a door to a small room in the top left hand corner of the room. ((I think I deleted a couple 'rooms' but still, try not to use the word 'room' too too much)) The couch and table were at a significantly lower level than the rest, forming what looked like a cup when she took in all her surroundings at once. Elaina walked down the stairs and sat down on one of the chairs nearest to the Elder.
"You asked for my assistance Elder?" said Elaina.
"That I didâ€