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My Poetry
PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 9:14 am
by seaglass27
"Weeping Willows" by Otaku Jordan
Wigs of twigs, leafy tears going
Floating on wind waves, flying, flitting, fleeting;
Worn wood, so old, betrayed to cold
The trees of sorrow stand naked and weeping
I have this copyrighted so please no posting it elsewhere. Thank you.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:09 am
by seaglass27
"The Suicide Haiku" by Otaku Jordan
If all my friends jumped
Off a cliff, would I jump too?
No, I would jump first
Let me make it perfectly clear that I am not suicidal and I am not promoting suicide in any way. This is just something that crossed my mind as being slightly humorous and also dark at the same time, which I thought was cool.
PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:40 am
by bakura91
Nice writing! I'm pretty into writing myself, your really good!
PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2011 11:51 am
by seaglass27
bakura91 (post: 1498331) wrote:Nice writing! I'm pretty into writing myself, your really good!
Thank you.
I don't have a title for this haiku yet so if anyone thinks of a good one please let me know.
Birds on power lines
Making beautiful music
Like notes on a staff
I got the inspiration for this by looking at crows on power lines and seeing that they looked like notes on a music staff and made music like them too.
... If you can call a crow's caw musical.