Thoughts Gathered in the Twilight ~animewarrior's poetry thread
PostPosted: Mon Feb 02, 2009 5:34 pm
Hey guys I figured I'd best put this up.
I've been feeling rather thoughtful the past few weeks so I should update this regularly .... (I hope...)
I usually write in free verse and feel free to give feedback (both positive and things I could work on...but please be nice about it ^^)
So anyways to get this started I'll post a poem I did for school that I really enjoyed creating.
We had to find a picture online and write a poem on how the picture made us feel or what it made us think of.
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A Crystalline Blue
Grace and ferocity intertwined
The tiger is in a place of wonder
No longer chased, it resides in innocence
Caught in a pallet of cool shades
Blues, violets and shining silvers
Emphasize the brilliance of this moment
Captured by the artist and his paintbrush
Who lies unseen
Butterflies with wings of gossamer white silk and lace
Quiver in the air around the magnificent beast
Unafraid, they fly in peace
Throughout the crystalline cave in which they dwell
Water flows across the jagged rocks
Creating the ultimate soundtrack to this scene
Clear as a mirror, it shimmers
As the tiger drops its paw into its shallows
With coat of silver & the color of the darkest night
The creature glances to the side, in look of prey or friend or foe
Always continuing on the journey, yet caught for a moment
In the crystalline blue
-by animewarrior
I've been feeling rather thoughtful the past few weeks so I should update this regularly .... (I hope...)
I usually write in free verse and feel free to give feedback (both positive and things I could work on...but please be nice about it ^^)
So anyways to get this started I'll post a poem I did for school that I really enjoyed creating.
We had to find a picture online and write a poem on how the picture made us feel or what it made us think of.
----------------
A Crystalline Blue
Grace and ferocity intertwined
The tiger is in a place of wonder
No longer chased, it resides in innocence
Caught in a pallet of cool shades
Blues, violets and shining silvers
Emphasize the brilliance of this moment
Captured by the artist and his paintbrush
Who lies unseen
Butterflies with wings of gossamer white silk and lace
Quiver in the air around the magnificent beast
Unafraid, they fly in peace
Throughout the crystalline cave in which they dwell
Water flows across the jagged rocks
Creating the ultimate soundtrack to this scene
Clear as a mirror, it shimmers
As the tiger drops its paw into its shallows
With coat of silver & the color of the darkest night
The creature glances to the side, in look of prey or friend or foe
Always continuing on the journey, yet caught for a moment
In the crystalline blue
-by animewarrior