First Song I've Wrote in a While.

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First Song I've Wrote in a While.

Postby The Liar XIII » Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:52 am

Yeah.. I just finished writing some songs.
I'll post the appropriate ones here. We'll, they're all appropriate, just due to the age thing. Language and stuff.

It's called "Wine and Dine". This is a part of a story I'm going to put together of songs I've wrote entitled "Up and Coming: The Story of a Rockstar".
This song takes place after the huge concert the band/artist put together. He's heading to his hotel room to party with girls and wine.

Hope you like it.

Wine and Dine
Written by Jonathan Sheaves

Goin’ to a hotel,
Stayin’ at the lobby,
I’m gonna,
Wine and Dine,
Gonna Drink all night
(Alright)

Stayin’ at this rockin’ hotel,
Stayin’ in the downstairs lobby,
I’m gonna,
Wine and Dine,
Gonna Drink all night
(Alright)

Chorus:
Winin’ and Dinin’
Winin’ and Dinin’
Gonna feel fine,
’Cause I got my wine,
I’m in the mood to:
Wine and Dine

I love the ladies,
I love the way they walk,
They’re gonna,
Wine and Dine,
They’re gonna drink all night
(Alright)

I love them pretty ladies,
I love to watch the way they walk,
We’re gonna,
Wine and Dine,
We’re gonna drink all night
(Alright)

Chorus

~Solo~

Bridge:
Don’t take my ladies away,
Don’t take my babies away, from me!
Don’t take my wine away,
Don’t take my life away,

Chorus


Good vibrations!
Good vibrations!
Good vibrations!
Right on, right on!
Good vibrations!
(Gotta have those)
Good vibrations!
(My ladies give me)
Good vibrations!
(They always want my)
Good vibrations!

Right, Right, Right!
Drink it!
Drink it!
Drink it!
Drink it!
All!
Night!
Long!

C’mon, C’mon,
Let me be your:
Man!
I want to be your:
Man!
Can I be your:
Man?
Lord, please let me be a:
Good man!

Alright!

Alright!

Deep!

Deep!

Good Vibrations!

Get it right!

Chorus

~Solo and Fade out with women chanting “Good Vibrations!”~


I would post another, but I'm not sure if it's good.
Basically some guy is asking Jesus for a Cadillac. ;)

If it's alright, I'd post it.
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Postby Bumblebee » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:06 pm

This is good, like really good :)
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Postby The Liar XIII » Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:10 pm

Bumblebee (post: 1282714) wrote:This is good, like really good :)


Thank you :)
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Postby The Liar XIII » Tue Jan 20, 2009 6:45 am

I got two more.

This one is a prequel to "Wine and Dine" and is called "The Concert", which is made up of six parts.
I wont tell you the meaning. I want you guys to decipher it!

The Concert Part I
Written by Jonathan Sheaves

Spoken Part:

I stood alone.
Beads of sweat slowly ran down from my forehead to my neck.
I felt the pulse.
The pulse of greatness.
I knew the show had begun.
I could hear the fans…
… Screaming..
Chanting my name

[B]~Crowd chanting “Mike Diamond!â€
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