CAA: Christian Anime Alliance

I wanted to know what you guys think of this piece. I wrote it during class when I should have been paying attention, so I figured I might as well get some feedback on it. And please don't go easy on me; be completely honest, 'kay? Thanks!

Unspoken
Dig deeper the hole
Burrow into my soul
What was whole
Is now cold
Because I won't let it be told
My love never unfold
Burning flames of old
Hearts were sold
Feelings mold
To bitterness, this I foretold
Perhaps my soul froze
Perhaps my heart closed
No seeds sown
No feelings grown
Because such love have I disowned

That's pretty good. I see nothing wrong with it really. It seems a little sad, but then a lot of poetry is sad--the emotion sad, I mean. ^_^

really good! I like it!

Thanks a bunch for replying to my poem and helping me out!

"Are you going to soon post more?"
She hoped there might be some in store

That line really wasn't talking about a person. Never really noticed that it could be. I was talking more about love never taking form. Does it fit right? Do you think I worded it incorrectly?