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Postby **aalenfae** » Sun Oct 28, 2007 4:21 pm

Thanks for pointing out the capitalization mistake. I wouldn't have caught it.

Postby **USSRGirl** » Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:24 pm

Interesting developments with the book. The fight scene was well-done too. The only thing that seemed kinda off was that the guard didn't notice that the gun wasn't loaded, since being a guard you'd think he'd be familiar with firearms. Unless he was too shaken up to pay much attention to it. :sweat:

Oh yeah, Ashiel tis cool. I like his attitude.

Postby **aalenfae** » Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:39 pm

I'm glad you noticed the gun thing. It's intentional that the guard (of all people) didn't notice. There was something else at work. It's a story point though, so I'm not gonna say the details.

Postby **USSRGirl** » Wed Nov 07, 2007 7:10 pm

Oooh. I see. Well, don't spoil it then because I like unexpected twists. :sweat:

The Eternal Book ([very] Working Title)

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