You ever have one of those times when your stressed or upset over something and a poem starts to come to you at random? I had one of those moments yesterday as I was laying in my bed trying to go to sleep and feeling a bit depressed. Hope y'all like it!
-Lonliness-
lonliness is in my heart,
it is tearing me apart,
I long for love but cannot find,
a man that one day will be mine,
Jesus is here to light the way,
but lonliness is here to stay,
is it wrong to long for such things?
or am I making hopeless flings?
my body longs for one man's touch,
is it asking all too much?
I toss and turn and groan at length,
I fell that I am sapping strength,
will God give me what I wish someday?
or is this ache here to stay?
The Bible says He will grant my need,
but for these moments I will bleed.
I realize that this poem is very dark and some of the things I said are not true...I shouldn't be lonely with Jesus lighting the way. But I felt sad last night and melancholy and when you are that state you say stupid things. Oh well. Hope you guys like it!:D
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acgifford - Posts: 576
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I do like it! haha, iv felt tht way before, and dont worry, i dont think your a suckish christian for wanting a sentient human even Jesus is enough XD
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D Thanks Kat! ^^ yeah....oh well! We all get through our moods for a time.[color="Lime"]"Do or do not, there is no try." Yoda[/color]
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I really like this poem. ^^ Though dark, it portrays the inner need for something. Certainly Jesus is wonderful! And I know that if I never get a human guy, I'll always have my Knight in Shining Glory. ^_^ It's comforting. But I've been where you were AC!~ So don't worry It's perfectly understandable. ^_^
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A very delayed response, but I loved it 
And this I pray, that your love would abound still, more and more with real knowledge and all discernment. Be prepared to preach the gospel at a moment's notice. Do you know the gospel well enough to do so yourself? Be ready.
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Amazing poem. I liked it a lot.
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Thanks you guys!:D I am luckily mostly out of that mood.^^ God is helping me.
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