Age Of Romance

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Age Of Romance

Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Nov 28, 2008 12:34 pm

Since my thread has been abandoned....here ya go.


An Age Of Romance

"Wedding Night"




"Carry me gently over the grass" she breathed to me
it's no mystery, we're fulfilling our love


her cheeks like dove wings shot through with roses

the blossom of her blush a bouquet

flowing from her throat

the moonlight flowing like teardrops, clinging to her hair
that shown in the pale moonlight.


the grace of her lace spread out before me

under the eyes of the stars...




...Tonight is ours.
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
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Postby Zarn Ishtare » Fri Dec 19, 2008 6:22 am

Anyone?
With your doubt, all is comfort
We are all as we appear
No more questions left unanswered
No more wonder, no more fear
Nothing is beauty, nothing's feeling
Blood where there once was a soul
So I ask you, prove yourself
Make me believe that you are whole
Zarn Ishtare
 
Posts: 1295
Joined: Wed Feb 11, 2004 4:23 am
Location: HELL HATH NO FURY, AT ALL.

Postby Sae-chan » Fri Dec 19, 2008 4:43 pm

Wow! That's great! :D It's filled with similes and metaphors... making it a powerfully descriptive poem. I like it a lot! Keep up the great work.

:D
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