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angel whispers

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angel whispers

Postby HisPrincess » Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:44 am

[font="Trebuchet MS"][color="DarkOrchid"]Down the dimly path I follow
Trees that rustle
Lights that glimmer
Cold and Wet
The ground here sparkles
Mist that rises pulls and beckons

Down a moonlit path I follow
Words I do not mutter
My heart and mind are one together
In my ears I hear a whisper
My heart must choose to follow.

Once the trees give way to water
Wide open clearing I come upon
Light from the moon frames my face
Winged heavenly beings crowd the water

Droplets of water
Each my own
Each a different shining hue
Place itself around my neck
a gossamer string
Intricate and light
A web that’s fashioned as a jewel
Upon my slender neck they lay
This piece that bears my name

I dare not take my eyes away
From the picture that before me lay
As purple lighted droplets fall upon
My earlobes as a jewel

And then I hear them in a rush
A whisper so light
The angels that crowd the water
Whisper softly to me

A song that’s sung
In whispered tones
Angel whispers
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Lord,I'm in love...WITH YOU!!! :)


God is the beginning, the middle, and the end...of my everything.

God cannot give us a happiness and peace apart from Himself, because it is not there. There is no such thing. C. S. Lewis

I gave in, and admitted that God was God. C. S. Lewis

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Postby ~darkelfgirl~ » Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:02 pm

Very descriptive ^^ (well, I don't know much about poetry except the basics, so...). Nice job in my opinion.
[color=purple][font=Tahoma][color=royalblue]"But those who wait on the Lord shall renew their strength; they shall mount up with wings like eagles, they shall run and not be weary, they shall walk and not faint."--[/color]Isaiah 40:31
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Postby HisPrincess » Wed Dec 05, 2007 9:20 am

Thank You!!!! :rock:
Lord,I'm in love...WITH YOU!!! :)


God is the beginning, the middle, and the end...of my everything.

God cannot give us a happiness and peace apart from Himself, because it is not there. There is no such thing. C. S. Lewis

I gave in, and admitted that God was God. C. S. Lewis

http://misschaii.blogspot.com/
http://avidchristianreader.tripod.com/
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Postby fairyprincess90 » Mon Dec 10, 2007 10:13 am

good job =] i like it
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Postby Shadowalker » Wed Dec 12, 2007 10:09 am

That was really very imaginative, and touching, and sweet.

Gossamer... now there's a word you don't encounter every day! :)
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