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Poem Game

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Poem Game

Postby Madefromclay » Wed Nov 29, 2006 8:48 am

Hey Guys, How is everyone doing today?
This is a little game. I'm going to start off with 8 lines and the test for you is to see if you can extend it. remember make the lines you add rime (no more than 2-8) and try to stay on the subject... Okay?
O- and try to give it another color too...


I knocked but you didn't answer,
I called and you refused to come,
I was anxious for you to meet me,
but instead you rejected my Son...
You looked for love in all the wrong places,
got a false sense of security,
I wanted to give you forever love and healing,
but because you rejected, hell is your eternity...
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Postby Ratrace » Wed Nov 29, 2006 10:12 am

not to good, but it will do

Yet I will come back again,
And stand outside your door
For I want you to be my child,
Not burn forever more.
A closed mouth gathers no feet.
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Postby Madefromclay » Thu Nov 30, 2006 7:27 am

That was pretty good Ratrace.

When will you let me in?
you're bleeding inside,
I desire to heal your heart
and walk close to your side
http://heartsthatburn.com
You Are Special! Yes you are...
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Postby Photosoph » Thu Nov 30, 2006 1:48 pm

For I'm a true friend
Who will always be there;
Never will I leave you;
Be convinced, for I care.
(0)>
((_\//
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[Quote=Photosoph]Well, t'was a good deduction, Mr. Holmes! *salutes Mr. Myoti Sherlock Homes* [/QUOTE]
Myoti wrote:Elementary, my dear Watsoph. XD

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