Song i wrote

[Taran]

Verse 1
You laid the foundations of the earth
you set the sky in place you filled the
oceans with water and you came and
died in my place

Chorus
You came to save us from sin
You came to set us free You
came and died in my place
because you loved me

Verse 2
You are Gods only son
You are the savior of the
world You are my best friend
and you came and died in my
place

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